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Contributed by
needledancing
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Saturday, 17th February 2007 @ 01:26:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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A special friend gave me a gift that I will put to text.
For every time his heart got broke, he always said Next.
It seemed a simple thing to do
Yet hard to say when you knew the who.
Another dealt with pain of heart
By tearing everything apart.
I wish I had the answer to how we each must cope.
When we get left with torn up hearts by an undeserving dope.
I say we take them out to crowd and bring them public shame.
We advertise to all who love the ruthless shredders name.
We go to see their Mother and find out why she taught,
This treacherous human being how to love-Naught!
I guess were born to learn the lessons love does teach us well.
To all who havent been there, Tell Love to go to hell.
Its better that you find a friend,
Friendship true will never end.
Copyright ©
needledancing
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2007-02-17 13:26:17]
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Re: Next
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by FRANCO on
Saturday, 17th February 2007 @ 08:39:53 PM AEST
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Good and a very thought provoking poem.
Selfless friendship shall truly never end Indeed.
You are a great thinker my friend.
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Re: Next
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by emystar on
Saturday, 17th February 2007 @ 09:54:21 PM AEST
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Good work.
I can certainly relate.
big huggs,
emy |
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Re: Next
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by yangdantien on
Sunday, 18th February 2007 @ 01:25:27 AM AEST
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As the heart is evolving some may line them up and go through them but this piece shows the good character to care and not loiter on the path of growth that each heart can make toward its own brilliance.
Good Job
Peace
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Re: Next
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by Dom on
Monday, 19th February 2007 @ 07:24:57 AM AEST
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A truly sweet, beautiful poem filled with hope; true friendships are indeed very powerful.
Dom |
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