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Thorazine Dreams
Contributed by
feralpen
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Saturday, 17th February 2007 @ 05:13:18 PM in AEST
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Thorazine Dreams
I watch in horror as the needle slides in
But really the horror only now begins
For now Im locked in total restrain
Nowhere to hide or run from the pain
I only cried out to let them all know
My demons were loosed, again from below
No hell is as hellish if one can just scream
But now in my silence, dread stalks my dream
Do legions of evil cough out their glee
Does the stench come from them, or is it me
Can they be right, is this just in my mind
NO it is REAL, MY GOD theyre all blind!
As tortures pile, I cringe at the weight
Crushing my chest, I MUST suffocate
Eyes open wide, staring at fear
Fear learing back, and no one to hear
Trembling starts as the drug grows weak
My whimpering cries again rise to a shriek
One hour, two? How long has it been
I watch in horror as the needle slides in
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Re: Thorazine Dreams
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 17th February 2007 @ 10:24:33 PM AEST
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| interesting poem, i really like it. love the imagery. good job ^^ |
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Re: Thorazine Dreams
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by yangdantien on
Saturday, 17th February 2007 @ 11:13:59 PM AEST
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I have seen Thorazine administered to adjudicated individuals who once dosed no longer carried any responsibility for their behavior. I stopped one so diagnosed from stabbing another with a makeshift shank while on the cafeteria lunch line by catching his hand and getting cut in the palm. My palm twitched upon reading and as I remembered after they sewed me up I stayed on shift never showing zero weakness but while he was in lock down I hummed & sang a bit to calm my nerves. A couple of years later I saw that person on the street preforming a cover of the Chili Peppers Otherside:
"How long, how long will I slide
Separate my side I don't
I don't believe its bad..."
Thank you for posting this as its excellence further heals an old wound.
Peace
Yang |
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Re: Thorazine Dreams
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by Vampirequeen on
Sunday, 18th February 2007 @ 12:02:01 AM AEST
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so sad to me
reminds me of what i had to go through with my husband.
take are |
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Re: Thorazine Dreams
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 19th February 2007 @ 03:33:52 PM AEST
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| Pointed and sharp, in more ways than one! |
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Re: Thorazine Dreams
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by brew on
Monday, 19th February 2007 @ 03:44:30 PM AEST
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cold and touching
what one could only feel....
Brew~ |
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Re: Thorazine Dreams
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by needledancing on
Monday, 19th February 2007 @ 04:37:43 PM AEST
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| As a nurse...I have been at the restraining end of people who have required medication. I often wondered how it must be for those recieving such cold non therapeutic help...thanks for you descriptive piece and insight...one day we will all be wiser on how to help those in pain. |
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