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last goodbye
Contributed by
unleashed
on
Saturday, 17th February 2007 @ 07:36:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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when every minute at home
is slowly but surely killing me
and every minute at school
has always been slowly drilling away at me
and every moment in public
is mocking my every blink
and the silent screams that you throw at me
just wont let me think
and the swords that you all throw
are peircing my heart and soul
and the way you rip me limb from limb
make it so i am no longer whole
and thanks to you i'm so imperfect
that i can no longer move
(i swear i don't know what youre thinking)
how the hell do you expect me to improve?
i swear i'm really trying
but im drowing in my tears
and with every minute with you
adds to my list of fears
im sorry, im done trying now
theres no more tears left to cry
with no one to love and no one to care
this is my last good bye
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Re: last goodbye
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by emystar on
Saturday, 17th February 2007 @ 07:45:44 PM AEST
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This is a very deep emotional, painfull write.
I'm so sorry for who ever is making you feel this way. No one has a right to do this to you.
Sounds like just too much pressure in your world.
Great writing.
luv, huggs, prayer,
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