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Scorched Earth
Contributed by
darkscorpio
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Sunday, 18th February 2007 @ 12:05:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Leave nothing behind, destroy what you built
Destroy the unhappiness, the lies and the guilt
Destroy all the years of frustration and pain
Destroy the resentment, the hurt that remains
Blow up your world, and remove from the table
Any issues of contention, but all things that were stable
Remove from your life, the cancerous lie
That festered and grew, and helped your love die
Purge the false sense of security that stagnation helped grow
Remove yourself from all that you know
Kill the disease, at the source, use the knife
Carve it from your soul, so you can breathe new life
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2007-02-18 00:05:11]
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Re: Scorched Earth
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by smilin_eyes on
Sunday, 18th February 2007 @ 01:08:28 AM AEST
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"Kill the disease, at the source, use the knife
Carve it from your soul, so you can breathe new life"
awesomeeeeeee...i loved your poem...the feelings...u seem to know how to portray feelings very well:)
i just pray we could do all that u've written in ur poem.
keep smilin~*
cheers.
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Re: Scorched Earth
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by Dom on
Monday, 19th February 2007 @ 07:28:03 AM AEST
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Wow, this is very powerful! I love the rhythm, if you read the poem aloud it has a great energy. You are very gifted at expressing emotions in a vivid yet relatable way.
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Re: Scorched Earth
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by unknown_utopia on
Monday, 19th February 2007 @ 08:39:23 PM AEST
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| I liked this flow |
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