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Night Falls
Contributed by
FleurdeSang
on
Monday, 19th February 2007 @ 10:50:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Tarnished sky, cobalt n o t h i n g n e s s
Whispers of decayed stars
And s/c/a/r/s
Tempt with s.e.d.u.c.t.i.v.e fingers
Burning my flesh, still patient
For your soft molestation
Bruised eyes of amber desecration
Humid with droplets of glass
Trying to tear through
((WHY ARE YOU CRYING?!))
Epileptic hands dripping red
WEARY muttering despondently to LIFE
Pink and bulbous on my breast
Trembling with my swallowed sobs
Laughing stains seep through carpet
Permanent reminders of my cancerous weakness
Parasitic yearning
A sigh of cold metal on yielding carcass
Sanity rotting as my skull erupts
In a black pandemonium of voices
My only wish is for peace,
But that, too, is dressed in robes of
Death
Copyright ©
FleurdeSang
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2007-02-19 10:50:17]
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Re: Night Falls
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by Brasco on
Monday, 19th February 2007 @ 11:10:49 AM AEST
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| I thought your ending lines were perfect, " my only wish is for peace, but that, too, is dressed in robes of death" great write. |
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Re: Night Falls
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by yangdantien on
Monday, 19th February 2007 @ 03:51:17 PM AEST
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A blend of language compression and common speech makes this deliver beautifully. Your talent is leaking at the seems and if the reader finds themselves with their finger against that leak please remove and let this flood over you.
Beautiful
Peace
Yang |
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