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Love Become's You
Contributed by
myheartsvoice
on
Monday, 19th February 2007 @ 03:28:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Love
becomes
you in every way
from every point of view,
it's
in your eyes
it's in your sway
it's everything you
do.
Love
become's
you in the dawn
when sun rays
kiss your
smile,
that
inner glow
that says hello
oh won't you
stay
awhile.
You
know in
fact i'd love
to
so
sweet
you've made
my life,
for
love become's
you even more now
you've become my
wife.
When
first we met
so long ago we both
were twenty three,
i
thought
perhaps you'd
like to know your
still that girl to
me.
Love
become's
you in every
way in every
shape or
form,
your as
beautiful as
starlight with a
heart that's
twice as
warm.
myheartsvoice
Copyright ©
myheartsvoice
... [
2007-02-19 15:28:41] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Love Become's You
(User Rating: 1 ) by Rhei76 on
Monday, 19th February 2007 @ 04:50:45 PM AEST (User
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Nice dedication. I'm sure she knows, she's still the girl you met so long ago. |
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Re: Love Become's You
(User Rating: 1 ) by unknown_utopia on
Monday, 19th February 2007 @ 08:08:57 PM AEST (User
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Sweet Sweet dedication |
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Re: Love Become's You
(User Rating: 1 ) by MisfitMe on
Monday, 19th February 2007 @ 11:12:47 PM AEST (User
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I continue to enjoy these celebrations of your love...w/ a theme so consistant, I can't help but equate your nom de plume, 'myheartsvoice' w/ both you & your lady...
Great Job!
BigLoveMuchPeace,
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Re: Love Become's You
(User Rating: 1 ) by venkat on
Tuesday, 20th February 2007 @ 04:29:26 AM AEST (User
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I like this..Venkat |
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Re: Love Become's You
(User Rating: 1 ) by venkat on
Tuesday, 20th February 2007 @ 04:29:29 AM AEST (User
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I like this..Venkat |
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Re: Love Become's You
(User Rating: 1 ) by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 20th February 2007 @ 11:50:38 AM AEST (User
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wow this is such another beautiful devoted penned out write.. i love the flow and wording.. beautifully written by you
vampyress Jenni |
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