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Youg little rebel
Contributed by
Lemont_D_Vaan
on
Monday, 19th February 2007 @ 11:59:02 PM in AEST
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Young little rebel, hold your head high
Your trouble your in, let out your sigh
Its the beginning for you, do not fail
Your life full of gold, prepare to set sail
Your running with your booze
Knowing you cant snooze
Wait untill they find you soon
And give you what they call your orange shiny spoon
Articulate unseen
With words that are keen
This game you play it has no end
Slow down now, so things start to mend
Young rebel bless it be
Your heart remains true, this i can see
Take what youve learned and use it to grow
Never loose what you have, always stay bold
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Re: Youg little rebel
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by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 11:00:16 AM AEST
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Lemont_D_Vaan, I liked both the structure and the message within this composure by you. I think we have all had a little rebellion in us at some point in our lives as we must conform to a point but never totally lol. Thank you for sharing your wonderful poem and yourself with us all.
Mickey Pig Knuckles
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