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This Is How It Ends
Contributed by
MickeyPigKnuckles
on
Tuesday, 20th February 2007 @ 09:29:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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" This Is How It Ends "
One special second you say
I love you
the bonding benefits
are your gain
How can you really say
you love me
when you get what you want
then leave me in this pain
You gave my heart great hope
then you cause me to cry
I give you one last kiss
followed with my good-bye
My heart still strongly loves you
my mind is screaming NO!
I will find my someone special
to them I will go
I will go on loving you forever
even just as friends
this is how it happened
This Is How It Ends!!!!!
Penned By James L. McHenry
Copyright 2007 James L. McHenry
Copyright 2007 By Mickey Pig Knuckles
Copyright 2007 Mickey Pig Knuckles (All rights reserved)
Copyright 2007 HeartFelt TM
Quote: Life Is Poetry In Motion, Great Poets Reflect Emotion
Quote: Poetry is "Not" a lost art. Poetry is better than ever. Of course you've got the usual gangs of idiots ( as the staff writers at "Mad" magazine used to call themselves) hiding in the thickets, folks who have gotten pretension and genius all confused, but there are also many brilliant practitioners of the art out there. Check the literary magazines at your local bookstore, if you don't believe me. For every six crappy poems you read, you'll actually find one or two good ones. And that, believe me, is a very acceptable ratio of trash to treasure. Credit: Stephen King in, "Everything's Eventual"
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Re: This Is How It Ends
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by needledancing on
Tuesday, 20th February 2007 @ 10:26:36 AM AEST
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Another good reflection on love and its many
tentacles of the joy and the sadness.That daisy picking he loves me, he loves me not...I love doing karaoke and one of my regular songs is Linda Ronstat...When Will I Be Loved?
There will never be too many love songs, poems or stories...Thank you again.... |
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Re: This Is How It Ends
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by brew on
Tuesday, 20th February 2007 @ 11:07:01 AM AEST
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Great analogy....Yes, LOVE.that word.....which is grand, and then Vicious.....But, there can be other paths to many smiles.......Just follow what is in the heart.....it can be right, sometimes.
Brew~ |
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Re: This Is How It Ends
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 20th February 2007 @ 11:09:53 AM AEST
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a very powerful and heart felt penned out write from you.. expression in this is excellent.. great job
vampyress jenni |
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Re: This Is How It Ends
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by yangdantien on
Tuesday, 20th February 2007 @ 12:29:09 PM AEST
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Some how I cringed at the last stanza for that is a curse I have experience more times than willing to count when your really love someone and they say I love you too but as friends forever.
However it is better to have loved...eh and in this your piece has the best ending as opposed to either a whimper or a bang.
Well Done
Peace
Yang |
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Re: This Is How It Ends
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by Rhei76 on
Tuesday, 20th February 2007 @ 10:49:41 PM AEST
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powerful, insight,
Sad to her go |
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Re: This Is How It Ends
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by Loriann on
Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 04:02:52 PM AEST
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So heart felt and moving this poem is. I cried becuase this is what I am going through now with someone in my life. Thank you for sharing this. I was again as always honored to be able to read this.
Loriann |
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