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To my dear friend
Contributed by
oneir8dude
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Tuesday, 20th February 2007 @ 11:15:57 PM in AEST
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I know your days seem dark
And relief wont seem to start
Your pain is the worse youve felt
Asking for Gods grace you knelt
It feels that our father denied you
And he didnt pull you through
It seems he only takes the kind
And pays the harmful no mind
In fact, he has been with you all the while
Urging you to raise your head and smile
For he would soon take the pain away
And add sunlight to your gloomy day
When things seem so far down
And the days weigh on your crown
I ask that you raise your head
And listen to what he has said
The signs are always there
If you look they are everywhere
Maybe he sent me.
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oneir8dude
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2007-02-20 23:15:57]
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Re: To my dear friend
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by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Tuesday, 20th February 2007 @ 11:53:02 PM AEST
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oneir8dude, I liked this poem lots as the message is so real and the way it is presented to your readers is perfect. I just had to reach back out through this comment and thank you for sharing such an inspirational poem and for giving us all a little more of you. Excellent job.
Your Friend
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Re: To my dear friend
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by jerseysue on
Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 02:28:42 AM AEST
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| Nice one Bill. Its nice to think someone is watching over us. And its also nice to think someone is sent to take care. Beautiful poem. Sue x |
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Re: To my dear friend
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 04:45:04 AM AEST
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Good work, friend.
Big huggs,
emy |
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Re: To my dear friend
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 04:59:58 AM AEST
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You are an earthly angel my friend. Its comforting to know that there is always someone watching over us. Your friend is very lucky & blessed to have such a wonderful, loving, supportive and caring friend like yourself Bill~
A beautiful write penned from the heart.
much love n hugs,
sue m |
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Re: To my dear friend
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by annoiosa on
Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 07:56:30 AM AEST
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| Luv it :) |
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Re: To my dear friend
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by sadaddy on
Thursday, 22nd February 2007 @ 06:37:41 PM AEST
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Oh my friend Bill, I know each time that I read one of your poems it will be inspirational to me. I know that you truly write from the heart and everytime our pin hits the paper. This truly brought a smile to my face and some peace to my heart. Thank you for sharing.
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Re: To my dear friend
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by shelby on
Saturday, 24th February 2007 @ 02:24:58 AM AEST
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I think he did send you and I hope your friend knows how blessed they are to have you near. I sure know I do.
This brought a happy tear or two to my eyes tonight. Lighting a warm fire within the soul.
hugsssssss
~Michelle~ |
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Re: To my dear friend
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by Whisper on
Wednesday, 14th March 2007 @ 01:30:34 AM AEST
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What a lovely write. The picture is the perfect touch,
Whisper |
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Re: To my dear friend
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by deadheadpoet on
Tuesday, 29th September 2009 @ 12:38:07 PM AEST
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Very beautiful...honest and from the heart. Your heart, man. Full of love. Honored to call you my friend. :)
Peace and hugs~
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