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I Hope You Find
Contributed by
MickeyPigKnuckles
on
Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 09:34:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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" I Hope You Find "
I cry and wonder why
we ever came to be apart
I try to piece together my life
and empty broken heart
you have left me all alone
with a faded memory of our past
when we first met and fell in love
we thought that it would last
Do not worry or think about
my empty broken heart
you are the reason for my hurt
when you broke us apart
A few months past and you need to know
that I'm doing fine
I'm moving on with my life
and my heart will heal with time
you did not want to be with me
its now so clear to see
you could not be a man to me
and tell me it was she
The past is past and I Hope You Find
what you are looking for
I gave my all to only you
and I even gave you more
you are the one I'll always love
deep inside my heart
I hope you have a happy life
with your brand new start!!!!!
Penned By James L. McHenry
Copyright 2007 James L. McHenry
Copyright 2007 By Mickey Pig Knuckles
Copyright 2007 Mickey Pig Knuckles (All rights reserved)
Copyright 2007 HeartFelt TM
Quote: Life Is Poetry In Motion, Great Poets Reflect Emotion
The Best And Most Beautiful Thing In The World Cant Be Seen Or Touched
It Must Be Felt With Your Heart
Copyright ©
MickeyPigKnuckles
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Re: I Hope You Find
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 09:56:20 AM AEST
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I hear ya. It's a ***** some times.
Great writing.
big huggs,
emy |
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Re: I Hope You Find
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 10:30:03 AM AEST
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this is a beautiful yet sad write.. even though its sad though it does give hope that you can move on and heal from the heartache.. beautifully penned!!
vampyress jenni |
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Re: I Hope You Find
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by needledancing on
Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 11:01:41 AM AEST
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| Another lovely piece....stay strong |
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Re: I Hope You Find
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by Rhei76 on
Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 12:22:25 PM AEST
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You have a way of expressing your feelings that just seem to flow.
Excellent, strong veiw |
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Re: I Hope You Find
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by little_genna on
Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 02:32:44 PM AEST
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| i can relate to this poem. and it is very hard to deal with loosing a partner. i still havent coped with it though i am trying |
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Re: I Hope You Find
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by Malcolmsdreamgirl on
Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 03:13:26 PM AEST
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I liked this because it shows how people actually can feel, lost, heartbroken, and yet there is a life after .... Once you realise you were with the wrong person and move on and allow them to move on too ..... Painful tho it may be.... I PRAY to God I never experience this in my entire life tho .....
Love to all the broken hearted
Dee xx |
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Re: I Hope You Find
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by Loriann on
Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 04:00:03 PM AEST
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This poem was very intense to me. I can relate to this poem . This is how I have felt for a very long time now. I am healing and I am moving on and this is the kind of poems that help people to know how common it is to have a heartbroken.
Loriann
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Re: I Hope You Find
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by unknown_utopia on
Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 07:42:48 PM AEST
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Outstanding flow
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Re: I Hope You Find
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by Pebbles345 on
Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 10:04:51 PM AEST
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Hello, I would like to thank you for your positive and uplifting comments. I would also like to say that you have a great talent that shines through in each and every one of your poems
sincerely,
Pebbles |
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Re: I Hope You Find
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by jmpy84 on
Saturday, 24th February 2007 @ 01:17:50 AM AEST
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| wonderfully done |
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