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Several Times A Day
Contributed by
needledancing
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Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 11:40:16 AM in AEST
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I meant to tell you something as I went about my day,
Oh heavens I can't quite grasp it now, the
thing I want to say.
It had to do with me I'm sure but was because of you.
I hate the way this brain of mine can make it all undo.
It comes to me each time you smile and tilt your head that angle.
Yet all the words from brain to tongue just seem to end in tangle
I'm sure I've told you lots of times and yet I seem so lost.
The words are right in front of me and then they all get tossed.
Oh help me out, at 93 I'm feeling very scared.
I'm sure it's all about the time and happiness we shared.
A hug would probably bring it back.
Oh yes that's it..I knew.
The words are here again "My dearest, I love you."
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Re: Several Times A Day
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by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 11:49:14 AM AEST
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needledancing, what a beautiful composure as the closing really touched this reader. This is a very sad frustrating disease for many and one day we can only hope a cure can be discovered. Your talent is shining ever so brightly and your love is appreciated by all. You are awesome and so admired.
I always appreciate your wonderful comments and look so forward to them.
Your Dear Friend
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Re: Several Times A Day
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by Rhei76 on
Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 12:12:13 PM AEST
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It's a good write.
I have yet to deal with this,
but you make it understandable how agrivating it is to forget what you know.
God bless
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Re: Several Times A Day
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by FRANCO on
Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 06:30:30 PM AEST
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This poem exposes your soft and compassionate heart. it is at this stage of senility one looks for some love and affection. very touchy poem indeed.
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