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My Headache
Contributed by
poet_in_waiting
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Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 02:36:02 PM in AEST
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My Headache
Deep within the pressure intensifies
New pain pummels subtly behind the eyes.
Temples bulge, beast inside endlessly tries
To escape from overburdened cranial confines.
Entering orally, encapsulated gladiators seek the foe.
Absorbed and disguised, quiet numbing battles follow.
Pressure slowly subsides the monster a memory. So
brow no longer furrowed and on with life you go.
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2007-02-21 14:36:02]
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Re: My Headache
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 02:39:00 PM AEST
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very creative write on getting headaches.. headaches are horrid.. I hope you feel better.. have a great day.. very creative write and thought provoking.. great job
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Re: My Headache
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by MisfitMe on
Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 03:27:23 PM AEST
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I unfortunately relate all too well...
GREAT JOB!!!
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Re: My Headache
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by myheartsvoice on
Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 03:34:11 PM AEST
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Wow sound serious i hope not you have a poet's flow and a lot of insperation from looking at the pictures. hope you feel better though. Nice write.
thanks also for the coment.
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Re: My Headache
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by needledancing on
Thursday, 22nd February 2007 @ 09:30:30 AM AEST
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Ouch...Headaches are horrid...great discription..but thank heavens the last verse lets me know relief finally will prevail.
Orally encapsulated gladiators seek the foe...now this is fantastic.
Tip...reflexology remedy...cold pac to head/hot water bottle to stomach....stops the headache.. |
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Re: My Headache
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by shelby on
Sunday, 4th March 2007 @ 12:46:22 PM AEST
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loved the uniques write about the headache. Get rid of it soon and feel well.
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Re: My Headache
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 2nd May 2007 @ 04:43:14 AM AEST
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fabulous! it actually hurt my grey matter to read it! lol! gratefully i have some of those gladiators around here myself; that was an exceptional line by the way....
love n' hugs nessa
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