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Array ( [sid] => 131961 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Lost [time] => 2007-02-21 15:30:03 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I lost my friend the one who cared.
The hopes and dreams all gone that we shared.

He listened to me and showed me the way.
Knew how I felt and just what to say.

He showed me the light at the end.
Because he was my one true friend.

I lost him for a reason I am ashamed to say.
On this in my life my saddest day.

How can people change in the blink of an eye.
Maybe its not change but just all another lie.

I give of my heart so fully and pure.
This loneliness I can no longer endure.

I need that feeling again in my heart.
The feeling of true love that will never part.

I dream of the day that he will come and say.
I love you my friend more and more each day.
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Lost

Contributed by Loriann on Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 03:30:03 PM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

I lost my friend the one who cared.
The hopes and dreams all gone that we shared.

He listened to me and showed me the way.
Knew how I felt and just what to say.

He showed me the light at the end.
Because he was my one true friend.

I lost him for a reason I am ashamed to say.
On this in my life my saddest day.

How can people change in the blink of an eye.
Maybe its not change but just all another lie.

I give of my heart so fully and pure.
This loneliness I can no longer endure.

I need that feeling again in my heart.
The feeling of true love that will never part.

I dream of the day that he will come and say.
I love you my friend more and more each day.

Copyright © Loriann ... [ 2007-02-21 15:30:03]
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Re: Lost (User Rating: 1 )
by MickeyPigKnuckles on Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 03:39:20 PM AEST
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Loriann, You have a natural ability of reaching out to your readers and gently touching their hearts with your awesome words of poetry. This was so heartfelt and I am glad to have this chance to be amongst your presense. When you compose your words of art with your writing style, rest assured that if you could see us you would see our smile. Please keep penning as I close with another great poem by Loriann.

Your Dear Friend
Mickey Pig Knuckles

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Re: Lost (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 05:18:12 PM AEST
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this is a very expressive raw write.. I like how you just outted your feelings.. people do change with a blink of an eye usually because they are influenced or just change their minds out of no where and sometimes there really isn't a good reasoning.. a true friend never gives up on you and never leaves your life no matter what you may go through.. this is a well expressed write

vampyress Jenni

Re: Lost (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 07:11:31 PM AEST
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sadly this flows
with
a deep release of sorrow...

Re: Lost (User Rating: 1 )
by Malcolmsdreamgirl on Thursday, 22nd February 2007 @ 03:15:19 AM AEST
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I agree with Phants comment ....

I loved the simplicity of your poem which says so much

good write

Dee xx

Re: Lost (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Thursday, 22nd February 2007 @ 05:30:09 PM AEST
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full of sadness, but at the same time there is a bit of hope as well...nice job,

wiz

Re: Lost (User Rating: 1 )
by AirHead on Sunday, 18th March 2007 @ 12:15:59 PM AEST
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I'll never tire of reading your poems they say all & more that I want to say to my one true love but sadly can't

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