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Played!!!
Contributed by
Grownbabygirl
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Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 07:46:21 PM in AEST
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Played!!!
It's been a week,
Since the last time we spoked.
Finding it so hard to get any sleep,
Remembering you holding me at night,
Praying asking God " why do we fight".
I thought you were different,
I tried to let you in,
Afterall, we were suppose to be friends.
How stupid of me,
A blind man could have seen you playing me.
You said, we should have been together years ago,
But you probably would have dipped on me then too, who knows.
One day someone is going to play you,
And when they do,
I hope you start to believe in Karma too.
How could you do this to me, of all people,
I always thought we would remain friends, if nothing else.
But you ruined us, showing me your True Immature Self.
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Grownbabygirl
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2007-02-21 19:46:21]
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Re: Played!!!
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 07:49:11 PM AEST
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this is a true outpouring heartfelt write.. that was wrong of your "friend" to do that to you but look at it this way.. at least you found out now what kind of person they truly were and you can move on.. they have to live with being that kind of a person and yes Karma will catch up.. nicely written
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Re: Played!!!
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by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Thursday, 22nd February 2007 @ 12:01:21 AM AEST
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Grownbabygirl, The content of this poem may contain a sad heart breaking message its structure and meaning is right on. I have been played a time or two and it hurts and hurts a lot when you make the discovery as you at first don't want to believe it happened and then the reality sets in and wow does it hurt. I really applaur you for having the ability of writing such a meaningful poem related to this kind of emotional situation. Thank you for giving us a poem to relate to and especially for giving us a small part of you.
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Re: Played!!!
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by Inevitable on
Thursday, 22nd February 2007 @ 01:55:26 AM AEST
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| Aww that's said but it's really a nice poem |
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Re: Played!!!
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by Malcolmsdreamgirl on
Thursday, 22nd February 2007 @ 02:37:30 AM AEST
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This PAIN will only make you a STRONGER person if you can keep a positve attitude about it. Who'sthe loser here? NOT YOU
That "FRIEND" is looking searching for love feeding on the innocent to find it .... He will never find true love ....
To move on you must forgive and FORGET
without this experience how woud you know the type of person to avoid in the future?
Use it to your advantage and run like Billio if you sense anyone a whisker like him in the future coming your way
Lovely write and good luck ( tho u wont need it )
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Re: Played!!!
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by Rhei76 on
Thursday, 22nd February 2007 @ 02:50:32 PM AEST
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| good piece, you have an excellent way of saying this. |
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Re: Played!!!
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by myheartsvoice on
Thursday, 15th March 2007 @ 08:57:51 AM AEST
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Like the song say's, Every Body Play's The Fool. I can feel the intensity of the emotions you are expressing like a sizemagraph. this writting just earned you a 5 on the ricta scale.
Great work babygirl .
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