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It was all a lie
Contributed by
spend782
on
Thursday, 22nd February 2007 @ 10:19:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
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IT WAS ALL A LIE
it was alll a lie,
a trick a snare your
deciet why did i believe
it when you said you loved me
in the begginig i was
timid shy unsure,treating
me like playdo you molded
me into something impure,
but other than that
i knew it was love ,the
way you looked at me and
said i was your angel from above,
than later on things became
different, never returning
my calls all of the e-mails
i sent,
than one day i saw you kissing
someone new, I was filled
with saddness, and jealousy,
as my heart broke in 2,
As I walked home it began
to rain, collapsing across
the ground I cried out
all the sadness and pain,
as the days went on all
jealousy and anger went
away ,but unfortunately
the depression was there to stay,
doctors tried to put this
mental illness to rest,
but the girl knew there
there was only 1 soulution
DEATH
the girl was there all
alone, nobody else there at home
to witness the slits in her writst
caused by the unforgiving crome,
with one deep cut she saw a
quick flash, of her and him
having a picnic on a nice
summers day in the grass,
she gasped sharply taking
one last brath, before entering
into the darkness into a
everlasting death.
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spend782
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2007-02-22 10:19:44]
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Re: It was all a lie
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 22nd February 2007 @ 11:13:26 AM AEST
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a very good creative powerful write.. deciet is horrible and sometimes people are good at pretending something you have expressed this well great job
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Re: It was all a lie
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by Rhei76 on
Thursday, 22nd February 2007 @ 02:32:50 PM AEST
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| very loud vivid write, good job. |
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Re: It was all a lie
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by Bleedthelove on
Friday, 23rd February 2007 @ 12:40:42 PM AEST
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| "She gasped sharply taking one last breath, before entering into the darkness into a everlasting death". Those words give me chills, I can relate all too well. Beautifully written. Excellent job. |
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