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That Goth Girl
Contributed by
spend782
on
Friday, 23rd February 2007 @ 10:47:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Everyday I walk out the
door with my head held up
high,but you'd never guess
that inside I really cry,
My heart is filled with
saddness and pain,sometimes
I wish i'd just slit my
wrists and slowly decay,
the problem with me is that
nobody understands,i'm
constantly treated like
an outcast because I like
the color black,
school to me is like a battle
of lables,instead of using
weapons words prove to be
fatal
they are spat at me with extra
venom,all because I don't own
the latest denim,
but they only see the exterior
of me,the black eyeliner,the
tattoos,the and all of the
piercings
as I walk down the hall to my
next class,I here somone scream
out goth,and others start to
laugh
I here my name being
whispered down the halls,
I get so caught up in it that
I almost fall,
as people stare I feel a sharp
pain in my chest,I can't
take this anymore,I'm tired of
being depressed!
I rush into the girls room,
I am about to do sometihing
the voice in the back of my head
has been telling me to,
I pull out my razor and start
to cut,as I see the blood
I feel a rush,
I purposely take one last
deep cut,hitting a vein,blood rushes
out and I start to feel faint
taking out a piece a paper
I write something down
before falling on the cold
wet tile,and lying there on the ground,
Before I knew it I was there dead
beside me there was a paper that read,Br>
Everyone makes life sound so sacrad,but
it was you not the razor that
killed me it was your hattred
Copyright ©
spend782
... [
2007-02-23 10:47:38]
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Re: That Goth Girl
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by one11 on
Friday, 23rd February 2007 @ 11:42:26 AM AEST
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| we are always the worst judge on ourselves. what a powerful message in this piece. |
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Re: That Goth Girl
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 23rd February 2007 @ 12:57:27 PM AEST
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highschool is a hard thing.. I know how you feel. so you like the color black.. sometimes people pick on people just because they dont like the way someone dresses or becaue their friends pick on them. they don't have a mind of their own.. you should always be yourself. and when highschool is over all the clicks and labels don't even exsist.. you will see that .. this is a very sad peice though and well expressed.. I did enjoy reading it.. but seriously hang in there things will get better.
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