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World of my Own
Contributed by
Darkangelpoet07
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Friday, 23rd February 2007 @ 12:23:27 PM in AEST
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I am forever in the world of my own, lost without hope of return.
I am forever in the world of my own, crying everyday wishing to return to my once plesant life.
I am forever in the world of my own, this world that I created.
I am forever in the world of my own, this world that I have come to hate.
I am forever in the world of my own, this world that I am slowly fading from. For my wrist are slit and I am bleeding..
All because I am forever in the world of my own.
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2007-02-23 12:23:27]
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Re: World of my Own
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by Bleedthelove on
Friday, 23rd February 2007 @ 12:34:25 PM AEST
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| This is such a sad piece...even sadder because I can relate to it so well. You have expressed this sadness and hurt beautifully. Excellent job. |
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Re: World of my Own
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 23rd February 2007 @ 12:49:57 PM AEST
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I thought it was very sad.. it was well expressed.
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