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Bed Time
Contributed by
Smartie
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Friday, 23rd February 2007 @ 02:35:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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You let out a yawn, But yet not a snore This late at night You can't sleep anymore
The more tired you grew With each fallen night When the stars were out Shining so bright
Please go to bed You do need your rest Your making me tired I'm trying my best
I try not to worry I try not to scream I try not to cry That's how it may seem
Please go to bed You do need your rest Your making me tired I'm trying my best---
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Re: Bed Time
(User Rating: 1 ) by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Saturday, 24th February 2007 @ 10:52:06 AM AEST (User
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Smartie, This was very creative and your flow was smooth with a clear message of delivery. Good Job. Thank you for sharing your gift of poetry and for giving us all a little of yourself.
Mickey Pig Knuckles
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Re: Bed Time
(User Rating: 1 ) by Smartie on
Sunday, 4th March 2007 @ 09:20:22 PM AEST (User
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awe, thanks so much |
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Re: Bed Time
(User Rating: 1 ) by Demita on
Monday, 30th November 2009 @ 01:43:46 AM AEST (User
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i love this=] it reminds me of me haha
i cant fall asleep before 4am for some reason so im usually always tired |
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