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If Not You And I . . . Ben
Contributed by
myheartsvoice
on
Friday, 23rd February 2007 @ 04:27:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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If
nothing
is perfect
then how can it be?
a love such yours
ever came to
me.
But
your more
than perfection
or even the best,
in my heart you
are light years
above the
rest.
In
my eyes
your beauty
will alway's prevail,
next to you i dare say
even angel's would
pale.
At
time's
when your
out and we are apart
a trembling feeling enter's my heart,
i think to my self this is how it could be
living alone with no one but
me.
Then
you enter my view
as you open the door as
i look in your eyes i'm in love
once more, for what is
perfection?
if
not
you and i,
in
love
with each other
untill we
die.
Ben
the artist formerly known as
myheartsvoice
Copyright ©
myheartsvoice
... [
2007-02-23 16:27:02]
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Re: If Not You And I . . . Ben
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by Rhei76 on
Friday, 23rd February 2007 @ 05:30:26 PM AEST
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Thanks for personalizing it for us.
She really has to be the best. Hold on to her, I love reading this.
I don't know why, the only person I ever loved died years ago. I seldom use her now day, I used to write only dark, And now days it's just frustration with the world being consumed with whats less than we started with.
Maybe thats it, Your words take me back to some one I could write like that to.
I still have my muse, years away, but now it's more loneliness and I loss all meaning.
Thanks for writting so well on the topic of ya'll love. It's a bandaid to my scars |
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Re: If Not You And I . . . Ben
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by MisfitMe on
Friday, 23rd February 2007 @ 05:58:09 PM AEST
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Aww & Double Awww...This counts as a two for one deal, as I'm reading this w/ a friend who doesn't understand why we can't give you 10 stars, lol! I guess that says it all*wink*
I'd also like to make mention just how much I enjoyed the previous comment made which speaks to me of a soul touched by anothers words...& that's just beautiful! I gotta' believe that's what it's all about!
Right on!
BLMP~Me |
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Re: If Not You And I . . . Ben
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by emystar on
Friday, 23rd February 2007 @ 10:37:32 PM AEST
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What a strong, beautifull luv you two have blessed with.
Awesome writing.
Big huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: If Not You And I . . . Ben
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by venkat on
Saturday, 24th February 2007 @ 02:02:06 AM AEST
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Wow..very impressive and very sweet.
venkat |
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Re: If Not You And I . . . Ben
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by shelby on
Saturday, 24th February 2007 @ 03:03:24 AM AEST
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Hey mystery man lol!
Another delightful write as always your love poems are always a moving treasure to behold.
~Michelle~ |
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Re: If Not You And I . . . Ben
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by needledancing on
Saturday, 24th February 2007 @ 06:15:09 AM AEST
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| The day grew lighter and my heart awakened..and the love flowed through my pen...love again.....fresh, new, exciting... |
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