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Water Colors
Contributed by
Man_On_High
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Saturday, 24th February 2007 @ 02:31:01 AM in AEST
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I knew I was destined
to fall full-in-love with the moon
and I'l count half-bitten calendars
until it returns
to calm the quivering
and shaking of my hands..
while staring at spectacular
grains of sand
that illuminate;
like Chinese lanterns
in a glass mirage.
With nothing but time,
breaking down lines..
drowning mirrored reflections
and drenched shards
of imagery..
as memories bleed
like water colors.
Floating souls out beyond
the ebb and flow
of burning embers.. oceanic coals,
pulsing always, down all the grey days
behind my eyes-
wishing in a moment of settling comprimise,
to open them to a brand new world
Where I do not ache;
having never again to grasp
at something I cannot name.
B
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Re: Water Colors
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by emystar on
Saturday, 24th February 2007 @ 02:39:59 AM AEST
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Wow friend,
Another incredible write.
awesome!
Big huggs,
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Re: Water Colors
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by shelby on
Saturday, 24th February 2007 @ 02:52:02 AM AEST
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Such splendor I find while reading this hun.
The last few lines put a perfect final touch on this A + write.
~Michelle~ |
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Re: Water Colors
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by venkat on
Saturday, 24th February 2007 @ 03:46:35 AM AEST
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Wow.."memories bleed like water colors" what a great painting...
"to open them to a brand new world Where I do not ache" with a new hope..
really wonderful. venkat
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Re: Water Colors
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by Loriann on
Saturday, 24th February 2007 @ 08:38:41 AM AEST
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I really enjoyed this and the way it was written. It was very good. Keep up the good work.
Loriann
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Re: Water Colors
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by Keilantra on
Saturday, 24th February 2007 @ 07:40:48 PM AEST
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as usual, fabulous!
i loved your flow, darling.
and the subject matter, what a wonderful new twist! Most would go on about voices and whatnot, but you've made it quite your own.
xXx
~kei |
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Re: Water Colors
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by yangdantien on
Sunday, 25th February 2007 @ 05:05:08 PM AEST
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Strokes from a talented poet.
Excellent
Peace
Yangdantien |
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Re: Water Colors
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by wizard on
Sunday, 25th February 2007 @ 10:27:44 PM AEST
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bro, you really out did yourself (as you seem to do with all your writes)...but this one in particular grabbed me and took me on its fabulous ride... your imagery and metaphors are truly spectacular!
i read this twice, and concluded that i can relate so well to this (at least in my novice interpretation) that its almost as though this was a hand tailored description of my own thoughts and feelings of late...it really touched me like no other has.
with that said, i take of my hat and salute you and your splendid pen...and the emotion it weaves...
much love,
wiz |
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Re: Water Colors
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by Vampirequeen on
Tuesday, 27th February 2007 @ 02:40:04 AM AEST
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I have to say billy this write is a piece of art in it self.i am truely amaze how great your writes are,and just when i thought that it don't get any better you surprise me.
you are truely the most talented writer here besides venkat.
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Re: Water Colors
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 27th February 2007 @ 08:40:08 PM AEST
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Sweets .. I find that first stanza so painful, and beautiful all
at once. Your flawless expression of thought , as always
paints the most beautifully pained emotions ..
"as memories bleed
like water colors"
I find this so hard to get past .. it is a completely mesmerizing
sentiment. Though, you may not have intended quite this
meaning, there is a certain beauty in the blending of colour, no?
Like that of a painting, some memories are a timeless wonder that
I shall hold close to my heart forevermore ~
Do not hold tightly to those that cause you pain, dearest.
For there is much beauty in this life, left for you to discover.
This piece, not unlike most of your others, has driven
emotion through me like lightning. I am left, shaken,
inspired and in awe.
Ever humbled .. and with much respect,
XO
~Breezy
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Re: Water Colors
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 15th March 2007 @ 05:59:37 PM AEST
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I am so impressed with the clarity with which this was written Billy... you are usually at least somewhat veiled. The emotional course this piece takes the reader on from the enticing beginning, to forlorn end is just so honest and introspective. Great job expressing yourself.
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Re: Water Colors
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 23rd March 2007 @ 07:34:21 PM AEST
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Dearest Billy~ there is never a dull moment
when one visits your pages my dear friend.
It's contents are always outstanding &
brilliant.
You can always stimulate your readers mind and take them on a journey into your poetic world. I have been priveleged and lucky enough to have taken the journey through
the magic of your pen.
Poetically beautiful and sad. A tip of the hat to ya dearest Billy~
As always ur fan/friend,
sue m |
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Re: Water Colors
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 22nd July 2007 @ 03:48:03 AM AEST
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Fraud! Fan of Sailor Moon are we?
You must watch sailor moon and hear Billy's orginal (LOL) words. |
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