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My Poetry
Contributed by
Baby_Teddy_Bu
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Saturday, 24th February 2007 @ 06:54:49 AM in AEST
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People write poetry to express their mind,
many crying for help for someone to find.
Some write about love and inspirational things,
like "The Raven" and "I Know Why The Caged Bird Sings."
Although I''m not as popular as many other poets,
"To some you are more," mom says "you just don''t know it."
I do want to be known, this much is true,
as a matter of fact... ever heard of Bu?
Misery is not my creative motivation,
nor a magical spell or an incantation.
I wish it could be because of love,
or some divine influence from up above.
But no... it''s just me,
since that''s all I knwo how to be.
Though I''ll admit I''m condemned to rhyme,
just about on each and every line.
For once in a poem i have no ending,
but in another point of view, this is just the beginning.
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Baby_Teddy_Bu
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2007-02-24 06:54:49]
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Re: My Poetry
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by Loriann on
Saturday, 24th February 2007 @ 07:23:03 AM AEST
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This was very interesting. I liked it it was different. Good job.
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Re: My Poetry
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by emystar on
Saturday, 24th February 2007 @ 09:55:57 PM AEST
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Very good writing.
Keep it up.
Big huggs,
emy |
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Re: My Poetry
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by SaintzAndSinnerz on
Sunday, 25th February 2007 @ 10:47:45 AM AEST
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| Your a great poet, and you showed that in this poem. Great job and keep it up! |
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Re: My Poetry
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by thumper on
Tuesday, 6th March 2007 @ 12:16:12 AM AEST
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HMMMM? Very Interesting. ;o) Welcome to YPDC. I liked the subject of this write. It's not bad to rhyme on every line. lol Keep on writing and I'll keep on reading. I like what I've read so far.
Peace to ya,
Thumps ;o)
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