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SIlence
Contributed by
Loriann
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Saturday, 24th February 2007 @ 07:20:35 AM in AEST
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The silence between us is so harsh and cold.
An anger we share that was foretold.
The lies and betrayals between us both.
From that very day we took that oath.
The vows we exchanged on that very day.
Tghe love that we had or so we potrayed.
The silence is thick between us now.
Whatever happened and how.
In love we were like children at play.
NOw we are both silent each and every day.
Where did we go wrong what did we do.
How can we allow both of us to loose.
9 years have gone by and now it is time.
To go our seperate ways where we will be fine.
You go your way I will go mine.
I can no longer stand the silence between us all the time.
Copyright ©
Loriann
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2007-02-24 07:20:35]
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Re: SIlence
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by Malcolmsdreamgirl on
Saturday, 24th February 2007 @ 07:44:15 AM AEST
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This was a sad a read, any got to my heart time changes people, we grow and learn at different stages - if we are lucky it can bring us to the same place ... but not ALL are lucky
But to remain in sadness of the heart and soul is madness ... we owe it to ourselves and eachother to move on and find happiness once again ... and again and again if need be.. because OUT THERE is a perfect match for everyone!
Good luck lovely read
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Re: SIlence
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by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Saturday, 24th February 2007 @ 11:37:39 AM AEST
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Loriann, Once again you pour your emotions out as your readers grasp. You have such an awesome ability of gently touching your readers with strong emotional words that many will relate to and reflect upon as some of us have or are currently living this kind of relationship. One day you will find the guy that will cherish you for the wonderful girl you truly are and he will devote all of his time and attentions to only you without any outside distractions and/or peer pressures as a true man always places his woman first above all else. Thank you for always sharing yourself with us as you are truly admired for the beautiful person you are. Wonderful poem.
Your Dear Friend
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Re: SIlence
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by Dom on
Saturday, 24th February 2007 @ 03:53:55 PM AEST
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This poem really moved me, it was hard to read because the emotions conveyed are so powerful and eloquently expressed. Just take heart because there's someone better out there for you,
Take care,
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Re: SIlence
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by emystar on
Saturday, 24th February 2007 @ 09:51:10 PM AEST
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Sad but well written. I've benn there too many times so I can totally relate.
big huggs, mucho strength,
emy |
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Re: SIlence
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by Whisper on
Sunday, 25th February 2007 @ 05:38:00 PM AEST
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Nice write good flow this reader could feel the release of words well chosen
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