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Earths Reward
Contributed by
needledancing
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Sunday, 25th February 2007 @ 10:05:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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The largest cloud of blue appeared upon the earths sick face,
The rains of red oh how they spread upon the largest space.
The grass became a shade of black and felt like slime to touch.
The waters now were bitter and not ingested much.
The earth gave off a putrid smell and raised a noxious gas.
No food could grow upon the earth or feed the hungry mass.
Youve done with me said Mother earth Ive had enough of you.
Your lack of all youve done to me, I now shall show Im through.
Ill rid my back of all my ills and that shall be the end.
I thought that we would make it but you are not my friend.
Youve taken every morsel with your greed and heartlessness.
I show you now this barren place were you shall lay to rest.
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needledancing
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2007-02-25 22:05:52]
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Re: Earths Reward
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by emystar on
Sunday, 25th February 2007 @ 10:15:59 PM AEST
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Very well done.
big huggs,
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Re: Earths Reward
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by yangdantien on
Sunday, 25th February 2007 @ 10:50:40 PM AEST
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Ah dear friend this is a dark vision. It just may be the Earth is smarter than we who inhabit and it is certainly more incumbent of us to plan for great shifts and changes as she rights herself than to gather profit & wealth for a select few.
Well Done
Peace
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Re: Earths Reward
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by Rhei76 on
Monday, 26th February 2007 @ 10:03:52 AM AEST
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I think you are so right
The darkness here really brings out the message
another excellent write |
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Re: Earths Reward
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by PhantomVampyress on
Monday, 26th February 2007 @ 09:37:56 PM AEST
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well written and so true.. this is well expressed.. great job
vampyress jenni |
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Re: Earths Reward
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by myheartsvoice on
Monday, 26th February 2007 @ 10:35:43 PM AEST
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A most esential write in defence of our great planetary home in which may render us all homeless sooner than we think.
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