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Kiss Away
Contributed by
wizard
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Monday, 26th February 2007 @ 09:08:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Could my love be but a kiss away?
Or have I kissed love away for the
Last time with my misguided lips?
Could an angels sigh be just a poem away?
As her breath is taken with each word as
She lay her golden eyes upon the page.
Could my restless nights be laid to rest,
Even without her at my side? Her splendid
Scent engulfing the room, the world.
Could a golden dream be but a nap away?
Where Id see her smiling face and Id be
Unafraid to hold her tight, and never let go
Or could happiness be just a call away?
Waiting to be made, just one call to
Hold such a tender love within my arms again.
Yet again I kissed away this yearning love.
Now I sit with shallow dreams gone astray
Pondering the irony of love being a kiss away.
Copyright ©
wizard
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2007-02-26 09:08:17]
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Re: Kiss Away
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by Malcolmsdreamgirl on
Monday, 26th February 2007 @ 09:50:22 AM AEST
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There's a lot of kissing goes on til we find the "right one" .... I say kiss away and enjoy -
Nice write
Dee xx |
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Re: Kiss Away
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by PhantomVampyress on
Monday, 26th February 2007 @ 09:57:08 AM AEST
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this is a very heartfelt powerful piece.. its well expressed.. don't worry you will find the right one.. things don't work out for a reason.. there is usually a lesson to learn or you to help them learn something.. great job
vampyress jenni |
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Re: Kiss Away
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by Loriann on
Monday, 26th February 2007 @ 06:31:18 PM AEST
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this is very nice but sad. I hope this is not how you feel. I have felt like this hun .
xoxox
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Re: Kiss Away
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by GingerB on
Monday, 26th February 2007 @ 07:45:03 PM AEST
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Well done, Paul..
Loved this.
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Re: Kiss Away
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 26th February 2007 @ 07:55:08 PM AEST
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aww so lovely
you did great
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Re: Kiss Away
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by needledancing on
Tuesday, 27th February 2007 @ 08:26:57 AM AEST
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| Very good piece...brings to mind a song from long ago...and when two lovers miss...a kiss is still a kiss..I think Jimmy Derante sang it...anyway..good piece. |
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Re: Kiss Away
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 15th March 2007 @ 06:43:52 AM AEST
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Good job, Paul.
wabl
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Re: Kiss Away
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by Man_On_High on
Friday, 16th March 2007 @ 10:48:46 PM AEST
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Fantastic work bro..
and I concur fully, with your sentiments..
I understand you in this perhaps more clearly than ever before-
Much love..
B |
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Re: Kiss Away
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 23rd March 2007 @ 06:31:33 PM AEST
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Dearest Paul~
This brought a tinge of sadness to fill my heart my dear friend.
There will be alot of kissing done til you find the lady that is right for you Paul~
I hope that your dreams are fulfilled real soon and that after all the kissing is done you shall find the lady that shall love you and your beautiful loving heart forever my dear friend.
The best of luck to you dearest Paul~
love n hugs,
sue m |
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Re: Kiss Away
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 11th April 2007 @ 09:37:03 PM AEST
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Very well penned!
The flow of each stanza shines with hope, then that last stanza brings it all home. Like being brought right to the edge only to be snatched away..... |
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Re: Kiss Away
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 29th April 2007 @ 01:26:49 PM AEST
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beautiful in style and grace, wistfully sad...
love n' hugs nessa |
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Re: Kiss Away
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 9th August 2008 @ 01:54:03 PM AEST
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| This is poetry in its truest form. I couldn't possibly put a comment on here that would do the poem justice, but I had to post anyway, just to show my appreciation... |
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