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Weeping Canvas
Contributed by
DrowningHeart
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Monday, 26th February 2007 @ 10:03:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Admire the rays, this canvas portrays
Of one soul and the stories its told
Seen through the eyes that can see through clear sight,
but the blind can see clearly, no sight without light
No doubt of a beauty that vanished, its lost
Within a dark vision, not a second glance
A broken heart, of misplaced romance
A portrait hung out to dry
The pain seen through its weeping eyes.
Copyright ©
DrowningHeart
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2007-02-26 10:03:20]
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Re: Weeping Canvas
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by PhantomVampyress on
Monday, 26th February 2007 @ 10:42:59 AM AEST
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wow this is a wordy piece of art.. it flows as if it is a painting.. i love the creativity .. its so sad but portrays a picture.. great job
vampyress jenni |
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Re: Weeping Canvas
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Wednesday, 14th March 2007 @ 07:24:22 AM AEST
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This was beautiful. I like how the words flow together and the sadness that flows through just makes this picture sound beautiful and sad all at the same time. Great poem.
Take care
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Re: Weeping Canvas
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by needledancing on
Monday, 14th May 2007 @ 11:26:10 PM AEST
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| Wonderful job. So symbolic of the paintings we would be should the colour of our experiences and emotion hit the canvass.Excellent. |
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