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A Prayers Touch Away
Contributed by
MickeyPigKnuckles
on
Monday, 26th February 2007 @ 12:09:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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" A Prayers Touch Away "
After the car crashed
unheard screams
then came total silent darkness
through my blood filled eyes
a glimpse I saw
a bright white light
right before my eyes completely opened
I saw a beautiful vision
restored to me
a very clear sight
I felt really strange
I started to drift
something was pulling me
out of the mangled car
on the cliff
I was being taken away
away from my home
taken way up so high
to a golden dome
I was really sad
and so teary eyed
it was then that I realized
I had just died
a special miracle
is what I was given
a lifetime pass
up into Heaven
Looking all around
so many beautiful things
when suddenly I felt
my own Angel wings
please, mom and dad
don't you all cry
I made it to Heaven
it was my time to die
I am much better now
than I was before
I will wait for you both
at Heaven's door
please pray with me
for the man
that took my life away
I just turned 16
but through his life
he will forever pay
In his drunken rage
his soul is weak
he is a mess
he may still be alive
but its dear God
he must confess
mom and dad
I am with you always now
each and every day
maybe not physically
anymore
but always A Prayers Touch Away!!!!!
Penned By James L. McHenry
Copyright 2006 James L. McHenry
Copyright 2006 By Mickey Pig Knuckles
Copyright 2006 Mickey Pig Knuckles (All rights reserved)
Copyright 2006 HeartFelt TM
Quote: Life Is Poetry In Motion, Great Poets Reflect Emotion
Copyright ©
MickeyPigKnuckles
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2007-02-26 12:09:07]
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Re: A Prayers Touch Away
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by Loriann on
Monday, 26th February 2007 @ 02:39:14 PM AEST
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Wow this was amazing a true masterpiece I was completely moved by this. I was honored.
Your friend
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Re: A Prayers Touch Away
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by PhantomVampyress on
Monday, 26th February 2007 @ 04:25:28 PM AEST
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a very heart felt penned out piece here.. beautifully done.. such inspiration for us to pray more and appreicate what we have even more so.. well said
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Re: A Prayers Touch Away
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by needledancing on
Monday, 26th February 2007 @ 09:58:55 PM AEST
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| It doesn't take much for the ones we love to be taken away...the carelessness of mankind on many hearts will grind...thank you Mickeypigknuckles for your gentle reminder..good write |
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Re: A Prayers Touch Away
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 27th February 2007 @ 12:36:15 AM AEST
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Heart wrenchingly sad but beautifully written.
Big huggs,
emy |
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