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War
Contributed by
Cutey
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Monday, 24th February 2003 @ 02:00:00 PM in AEST
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why does every one think about
fighting and hating others well
that wont make things better
for any one why does war have
to solve every thing it really
don't do much for any country
but make it worse then it is
all ready we all lose people
that we love and care about
and the ones who have family's
get left be hide with pain and feel
lost why can't talking and working
on thing's work when you can send
people in to other countries to get
there weapons to try and stop them
for using then on any one or any
other country why do we got to
keep losing people to prove
some thing that can be done by
losing more people in the war
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2003-02-24 14:00:00]
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Re: War
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by Varro on
Monday, 24th February 2003 @ 05:30:07 PM AEST
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| I don't know whether you did it on purpose, but the visual shape of the poem reminds me of an urn. Perhaps..signifying a burial urn of human ashes. If so it was brilliant! |
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