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I am...
Contributed by
sena
on
Tuesday, 27th February 2007 @ 06:10:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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a mother
a daughter
a sister
a registered nurse
a friend
fragile
in pain
beautiful
ugly
sick
mourning
lost
lonely
stressed
broken
frustrated
invisible
naieve
emotional
lost
compassionate
loyal
scared
medicated
neurotic
grieving
guilty
ashamed
hurt
a woman
a little girl
lost
sad
worrying
distrusting
nervous
suffering
unhealthy
unwise
crying
sympathetic
lost
nothing
everything
bored
failure
success
closed
fragile
weak
strong
broken
in agony
scars
lost....lost...lost.
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sena
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2007-02-27 18:10:59]
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Re: I am...
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 27th February 2007 @ 06:50:36 PM AEST
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We all get lost from time to time.
Awesome writing.
Pull yourself up and hang tuff.
big huggs, prayer,
emy |
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Re: I am...
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 27th February 2007 @ 06:57:40 PM AEST
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oh my .. sweetie .. this is painful (if only because of how
relative it is ..) The word lost, repeated throughout delivers
such a powerful sentiment ..
a great piece. I love the one word lines .. gives it
so much emphasis. An excellent post!
~Breezy |
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Re: I am...
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by yangdantien on
Tuesday, 27th February 2007 @ 09:58:20 PM AEST
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This poem is a word engine in down shift to turn into a stick perhaps to beat the self or to just talk softly.
Your pen is your salvation keep it moving, thoughts swirling, words flowing and you will create the beauty in life that is already in your heart.
Blessings & Peace
Yangdantien |
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Re: I am...
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by Supercreep on
Wednesday, 18th June 2008 @ 01:10:44 AM AEST
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| I really like this form. I think it works very well for you. So often when people are trying to convey a sense of uncertainty they tend to spell it out. i guess this comes from the very human need to rationalise and resolve the questions that one is raising. But by leaving this so open you really say it like it is. And perhaps one has to be lost to be found as loss provokes some kind of inner questioning. Now I will have to go away and try and write something in the same form... Quite inspirational.. |
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