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Act Scene I
Contributed by
an3n
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Wednesday, 28th February 2007 @ 09:28:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I am leaving because i can't compete
your past
your fears
your stupid ideas
I am leaving because i'm tired of trying
to make us one
in a thing that involves two,
when i'm the only one.
I always thought that people break up
because they can't get along
but we can
I just can't understand
I am leaving, because i never will
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an3n
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2007-02-28 09:28:00]
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Re: Act Scene I
(User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 28th February 2007 @ 11:53:24 AM AEST
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this is a very expressive piece.. you can feel your frustation in this peice.. its well expressed.
its good that you realize something dont' work before you end up with them for a long time.. sometimes people just want different things and aren't always clear or try to hold on to someone or change them which really never works. and so true that is a relationship takes 2 people not one.. if your doing all the work now imagine the future.. scary!!
good luck with future relationships
vampyress Jenni |
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