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Your Frist Love!!!!!
Contributed by
Puppy
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Wednesday, 28th February 2007 @ 03:11:32 PM in AEST
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Its so quiet now, i no longer hear you,
I no longer see your face,
I no longer dream about you,
You left me,
I thought you loved me....I thought you cared..
You had me worried sick, then i found that you were just ignoring me.
I hated the fact that you could make me feel this way.
I thought you loved me....I thought you cared..
Its been awhile and i miss you,
I understand that our friendship will never be the same,
But can we at least be able to say hello in passing, instead of cold looks.
I thought you loved me....i thought you cared..
Iam going to tell you honest and this is the utmost truth,
I will always love you,
You made me feel special, like i was the only girl in the world.
I loved every feature of your face,
I loved you quirks and funny traits.
You have and always will have a place in my heart as there is nothing like you first true love!!!!
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Puppy
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Re: Your Frist Love!!!!!
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 28th February 2007 @ 03:18:01 PM AEST
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this is a very well expressed penned out write.. you can feel the longing of missing someone and memories .. very good
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Re: Your Frist Love!!!!!
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by Loriann on
Wednesday, 28th February 2007 @ 04:33:29 PM AEST
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This is a very beautiful write. Emotion and love flow from this piece. Keep up the good work
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Re: Your Frist Love!!!!!
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by Jen_unknown_to_myself on
Thursday, 1st March 2007 @ 08:36:54 PM AEST
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I know how you feel it's like you were able to write what I wasn't I had been trying to put this feeling on paper but just couldn't. Thank you so much for this poem. Keep up the great work.
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