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gods of war
Contributed by
one11
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Wednesday, 28th February 2007 @ 11:41:37 PM in AEST
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the god world we live in
this apathetic life of sin
where not one of us will win
everyone will shed their skin
and GOD will be revealed
then this hell will be sealed
for another "time", "onetime"
where all this will be sublime
till then i will protest for peace
and be made into a martyr
please pray for this to decease
so i can leave the dirty water.
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Re: gods of war
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by myheartsvoice on
Friday, 2nd March 2007 @ 12:51:12 PM AEST
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This > then this hell will be sealed
for another "time", "onetime"
where all this will be sublime" is a most provacitive and stick in the mind phrase. i like this poem alot such unfilterd thruth and wisdom. U definately got it going on.
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