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Daddy's Little Girl
Contributed by
karoody
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Monday, 24th February 2003 @ 04:40:00 PM in AEST
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I remember climbing in your lap as a baby,
Seeing that look in those big brown eyes,
Hearing that soothing voice-
Knowing Daddy was proud of his little girl.
Years went by and I got the phone call....
"Daddy isn't doing well," was the heart-breaking news.
Tried to deny it, you were supposed to be invincible-
And there were still so many things we had to share,
Still so many ways I had to make you proud.
I stopped coming around as much
For the weight you had lost,
The pain in your eyes-
Told the truth I wasn't ready to see.
And as much as I tried to hide,
Daddy's little girl wasn't doing well at living.
Now those precious days are gone,
Fate has decided on another plan for your soul.
Your loving memory lives on in my heart,
But, oh, how I long to see those brown eyes once more.
So that I can help you undeerstand the distance,
Show you how I loved and adored you,
And see if Daddy is still proud of his little girl.
Copyright ©
karoody
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Re: Daddy's Little Girl
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 24th February 2003 @ 05:10:52 PM AEST
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Sigh... *wipes a tear*... Kara this is so beautiful!!!!!
Hugs and blessings....
Jenni |
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Re: Daddy's Little Girl
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by Lone_er on
Monday, 24th February 2003 @ 06:08:24 PM AEST
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| A wonderful tribute to love is this poem. I have no doubt your father smiles looking over your shoulder. Godbless---Russ |
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Re: Daddy's Little Girl
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by roisin on
Monday, 24th February 2003 @ 06:09:27 PM AEST
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oh Kara.. this is painfully beautiful... a very heartfelt piece...I am so moved by this....
hugs
rosie |
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Re: Daddy's Little Girl
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by SpreadYourWings on
Monday, 24th February 2003 @ 06:38:25 PM AEST
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| *tear, sniff, sniff* i could feel your pain. My father is struggling with his disease and is expected to go in maybe a few years. My condolences to you and your family. |
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Re: Daddy's Little Girl
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by CowgirlKid on
Monday, 24th February 2003 @ 10:49:06 PM AEST
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| My deepest sympathy is extended to you and your family. I shall keep you in my prayers. |
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Re: Daddy's Little Girl
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 25th February 2003 @ 01:07:28 AM AEST
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| Very precious memories. the poem is beautifully drawn, and it is touching. venkat |
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Re: Daddy's Little Girl
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by LadyDama on
Tuesday, 25th February 2003 @ 12:38:01 PM AEST
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| i shed a tear as well... a beautiful poem to your daddy... i am so sorry for your loss... blessings to you in this difficult time... very beautiful poem... |
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Re: Daddy's Little Girl
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by WordPoet on
Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 03:47:34 PM AEST
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My daughter and I are so close that I can't help but be moved by this piece. Heartfelt and sincere it tugs at me, making me want to rush home and hold my daughter tenderly in my arms.
Nice write. |
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Re: Daddy's Little Girl
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by PhantomsLDY on
Friday, 28th March 2003 @ 06:52:51 PM AEST
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| This is so beautiful. Again you have touched my heart to the core. I too am Dady's girl and so this brings tears to my eyes. |
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Re: Daddy's Little Girl
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by Trisha on
Tuesday, 9th September 2003 @ 11:29:51 PM AEST
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| i could say my dad gets to me sometimes but i know that hes just being a dad. i could say that i am close to my mom but my dad understands me when i need him. i could say this is sad and i can see your tears if i seen you in person. |
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