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The way you make me
Contributed by
poetrygirl1991
on
Saturday, 3rd March 2007 @ 11:40:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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I walk past you and you glance at me as if ive been on your mind all day.
I wonder if maybe, like me, your smiling inside.
It's the best feeling when were talking and you look into my eyes like their shooting stars.
I wonder what you think of me all the time..i mean when i think of you every love quote cant even come close to how i feel.
When your with me, im happier than anyone in the world.
And when your not, its as if the world stops..without you im empty.Every move you make, the closer we get to eachother, the weaker i get; because i know that id do anything to call you mine.
You make my heart feel as if its gonna burst through my chest, and you make me smile with every sweet word you say.
However im trying to break the habit of liking someone who i will never be with.
As much as it hurts to admit, i will never be yours to hold and kiss.
I wont get to brush my lips against yours, or be held in your arms.
I wont get to be that girl you call up just to say "I love you" too.
Its depressing, but maybe, just maybe, ill find him..
Since you already found her.
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Re: The way you make me
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by inlovewithaladd on
Sunday, 19th August 2007 @ 12:29:48 AM AEST
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I'm not picking on you, i promise.
this one is in the same style as the others, bland and uninteresting. my advice would be to try to inject more imagery, more show and less tell, if you will. |
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