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The life of a vampire
Contributed by
LadyDama
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Monday, 24th February 2003 @ 07:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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As the figure scales the wall
It's mind races through time
The creature breathes in the night
Tasting blood and flesh
On it's crimson lips
It's pale white face
Gleams and glistens in the blackness
From behind dark shadows
Comes it's unrelenting supernatural voice
Unhuman, yet oddly irresistible
Until along comes an unknowing being
And
Upon seeing the lovely creature
(Draped in black
With crystal fingertips)
Moves forward in wonder and amazement
Regretting the event as soon as it came to pass
The thing pounces on the sinful one
With a vicious nature
Baring stone white fangs
Coming close to the fleshy nape
Then instantly ripping the thin wrapping of the all sacred throat
With a violent jerk
The swift soar of Life flowing into the things veins
The human's heart beating faster and faster still
And then slowly, almost to a stop
Whereupon the creature pulls away
Blood dripping like fuchsia paint from it's perfectly sculptured chin
It smiles as it watches the sinful one die
Savoring the very moment of Death
And
Wiping the blood away
The creature slinks off to it's coveted refuge
For the sun is rising
And the thing must rest until
Mother Nighttime comes once more.
~the life of a vampire
July 26, 1990 (3:00 AM)
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LadyDama
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Re: The life of a vampire
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by The_Phantom on
Monday, 24th February 2003 @ 08:56:20 PM AEST
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Well That's one way to tell the life of a vampire, I enjoyed the poem, keep it up.
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Re: The life of a vampire
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by LOWMAN613 on
Monday, 24th February 2003 @ 10:39:56 PM AEST
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I will have to have my dad read this as hes from Transillvania! He'll enjoy this peice,he use to tell us stories when we were younger!
Good write! Christina |
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Re: The life of a vampire
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 24th February 2003 @ 11:18:42 PM AEST
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nice visuals......
makes me......thirsty..... ;) j/k
but it does....howwllllllll!!!!!!
Keep up the good work!
ANGEL ALWAYS....GODSPEED!
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Re: The life of a vampire
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 24th February 2003 @ 11:18:55 PM AEST
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nice visuals......
makes me......thirsty..... ;) j/k
but it does....howwllllllll!!!!!!
Keep up the good work!
ANGEL ALWAYS....GODSPEED!
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Re: The life of a vampire
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 25th February 2003 @ 01:03:56 AM AEST
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| This delusion remains no more for your present self.. venkat |
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Re: The life of a vampire
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 19th March 2011 @ 02:29:55 PM AEST
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| i love the way you have captured vampires, and i am so glad it's not in the twilight sense. well done, you've made an old vampire lover happy |
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