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The moon's emotional lunar eclipse..
Contributed by
Caz
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Sunday, 4th March 2007 @ 10:46:31 AM in AEST
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Aww such a beautiful sight.
I never knew the moon could shine so bright.
A process that lasted several hours.
But my god, It does have its powers.
From the start of the night, it lights up the sky,
Watching its movement, as it glides across the sky.
Still shining out bright, still sharing out joy,
Then it is time, for Mother Nature to toy.
Everyone joins, everyone gathers,
Just to see, the moons magic powers.
Loving the moon, with its whole face in bloom,
But now it is time for its slight facial doom.
Slowly disintegrating, chunks at a time,
Watching this happen, time after time.
Feeling sorry and lost, its now lost its spark,
It thinks its not pretty, because now it is dark.
Nothing has happened, I sit here and watch,
Are you growing? Please leave your mark!!!
I know you can do it; its not really hard,
I have faith in you, come on, and leave your mark!!!
Shine for us now; show us your light,
Be beautiful and change for the night.
Be red, crimson, orange or grey,
Just like they said, show us your ray.
Then beyond that blacked out grey we see,
Here comes the color weve been waiting on free.
Its surprising what happens with a little faith you see,
Now its perked up with a great brightness for me.
Disappointed never are we, with your great source, thatll trail the sea.
All over the world, and back to thee,
Youre simply amazing, how you can just be set free.
Just as a test, if it proved it was happy,
Shining out for the whole world proudly.
Warming from inside, and not the least bit rough,
Then it would be rewarded with the parts that it loves.
Now its back out owning the sky,
Showing whos boss, and lighting up the skies,
Highlighting the clear blue skies brightly,
Now you have just witnessed the emotions of nightly
Copyright ©
Caz
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2007-03-04 10:46:31]
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Re: The moon's emotional lunar eclipse..
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by shelby on
Sunday, 4th March 2007 @ 12:38:33 PM AEST
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ahhhh thanks for sharing this I was unable to get the full view of all the beauty as we live far from the East Coast lol. You wrote this wonderfully
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Re: The moon's emotional lunar eclipse..
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by yangdantien on
Monday, 5th March 2007 @ 12:36:40 PM AEST
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I love the intent of this piece as it has a bit of sprawling murky presence like cloudy sky on moonlight night as emotions wax on their way to understanding.
Good Job
Peace
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