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needle
Contributed by
priss
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Sunday, 4th March 2007 @ 09:26:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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the needle is left stuck in my arm
and all the days have melted into one;
the sting doesn't sting anymore
my body lies still, my heart is numb.
as i stare at the light of the moon
the poison is finding its flow
my eyes dare not blink, although
the urge to succumb only grows.
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priss
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2007-03-04 21:26:37]
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Re: needle
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by yangdantien on
Monday, 5th March 2007 @ 11:22:51 AM AEST
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"I've seen the needle and the damage done..." ~Neil Young
Work it out here and keep the pen flowing.
Peace
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Re: needle
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by myheartsvoice on
Monday, 5th March 2007 @ 02:59:40 PM AEST
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To write like this with honesty and the intenseness along with the hidden desire to survive, you have more going for you than you know. Just take it slow and and keep writting. Some how it'll all happen for you. It usually does. A nice clean and presentable style you have. sorry for your pain. Wishing a
gentle healing to you.
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Re: needle
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 13th March 2007 @ 12:51:55 PM AEST
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What yang says is true. "Work it out here and keep the pen flowing." This place is full of friends and inspiration. Therapy poetry society. That's what we are! You are a very talented writer.
wabl
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Re: needle
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by needledancing on
Sunday, 15th April 2007 @ 12:48:40 AM AEST
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| I have seen the effect in a medical world of the morphine that takes away pain. I imagine any other drug self administered is also taking away pain.Having studied and learned my own lessons about pain and dealing with it those who suffer have long roads to travel...but so worth it.This is a strong piece as it is so easy to succumb...so hard to accept the battle. Great piece well done. |
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