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The Renewal
Contributed by
The_Phantom
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Monday, 24th February 2003 @ 08:40:00 PM in AEST
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Here I sit in the wake of another heart break,
Crying those tears of pain, Staring at that wall of blame,
What can I say to make the pain go away,
The loneiness cuts deep, as acid tears roll down my cheeks,
Leaving behind the scars, of love's fallen star,
Through the ashes of love I begain to wade, fighting back death's cold gaze,
Standing in the middle of this dark and dreadful place,
I see a single rose prefectly place,
What is this I see, does this mean, there's someone for me,
So forward I go, I come to a hill covered in snow,
Lush with trees, as the wind gently sings to me,
The smell of the rose leads my way, as night succombs to day,
The pain of my past, is forgotten at last,
I approach the tomb where The Father was laid to rest,
I feel the warmth of love, as my body is carressed,
I drop to my knees and begain to pray, asking the Lord why today,
I hear a soft voice in the back of my mind,
I turn to look, she's an angel in disguise,
She begains to speak, I can not move, love has found me,
I open my mouth but nothing comes out,
No words of wisdom, no thoughts of freedom,
I'm right where I need to be, Cupit's arrow was true to me.
Forever Faithful
The Phantom
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Re: The Renewal
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 24th February 2003 @ 10:01:44 PM AEST
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Phantom, this is beautiful....very deep...
Hugs
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Re: The Renewal
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by LOWMAN613 on
Monday, 24th February 2003 @ 10:57:46 PM AEST
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Some parts were sad but at the end beautifully done! Angels come in all forms!
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Re: The Renewal
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Monday, 3rd March 2003 @ 04:37:47 PM AEST
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| wonderful write, the depth is very inspiring, thanks for sharing this |
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Re: The Renewal
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by Bizzy on
Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 06:13:45 PM AEST
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Dear Phantom, another nice one. How wonderful to have a love angel come when you are grieving in the cemetery of broken hearts! Guess that heart will not die afterall.
Bizzy |
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Re: The Renewal
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 08:40:29 PM AEST
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| i really love your poetry, another fine write here, as ive come to expect from you, this one has a very fine original flair here, i think your getting deeper..hugs and love to you and yours, and you keep safe over there buddy:) |
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