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Seeking Solace
Contributed by
thexshattered
on
Tuesday, 6th March 2007 @ 04:08:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Can you hear me cry out
from this desecrated place?
A mystery upholds the fear
that brings anguish to my face.
I feel the fear like the blood
that runs through my aching veins,
grasping with a choke hold
that bathes me in disdain.
Sometimes I get that feeling
where I can barely stand,
and there you are, grinning,
with a switchblade in your hand.
You slit my throat from behind,
and cling to my neck. Still
you wrestle me down to the floor,
and force feed me this pill.
And I bleed, and I choke,
and I cry as I die,
while you swim a river
of laughter deep inside.
Copyright ©
thexshattered
... [
2007-03-06 04:08:28]
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Re: Seeking Solace
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by Rhei76 on
Tuesday, 6th March 2007 @ 01:24:32 PM AEST
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very interesting
good write |
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Re: Seeking Solace
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by Bleedthelove on
Thursday, 8th March 2007 @ 06:05:51 PM AEST
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| Powerful piece. Lots of emotion. Excellent job. |
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