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What I Long
Contributed by
Xvaria
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Tuesday, 6th March 2007 @ 07:29:16 PM in AEST
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What I long
Is not meant to be
Crippled hearts glorify my life
Such a shame that I couldnt see
Blind folded I gave way to my soul
And then was throttled upon
In the moment of a second
My enmity towards good had begun
I dont want to question
I dont want to know
Anything about having love, life or hope
Can you stand in my shoes?
And then give a grin
To the unfaithful hopes, that gave way to sin
Dont question my mind
Or the way I am
I was molded from a piece of wax
To a hard rock that now stands bland
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Xvaria
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2007-03-06 19:29:16]
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Re: What I Long
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Wednesday, 7th March 2007 @ 07:17:47 AM AEST
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I liked this. I can relate to the feeling of wanting someone to stand in my shoes for a day. This was deep and it was beautifully written. The flow was great. Great poem.
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