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My Final Goodbye.
Contributed by
bleedthelove
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Tuesday, 6th March 2007 @ 08:16:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Life is a path
Death a destination
I've met the end of my being
My eyes are open wide
But I am not seeing
I can only feel myself depleting
As I watch my soul die
Kneeling beside your empty throne
Holding your crown, I stand alone
A vacant mind and a broken home
Engaging the end in a seamless gaze
Fearless I climb through this tortured blaze
Wings unstained, a broken hearted eternity gained
Forever my emotions have been locked away
Like the seconds of time on a forgotten day
This is the beginning to my ending
And I find myself remembering
How much I loved you, placed no one above you
Kept my word, stayed devoted, loyal and true
As I watched you leave me in this lonley space
Begging you not to go, as the tears rolled down my face
Out of hope, the end I must now find
Set my heart to rest and shutdown my mind
I'm so tired inside, I can no longer try
So here it is...
My final goodbye.
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bleedthelove
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2007-03-06 20:16:51]
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Re: My Final Goodbye.
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by priss on
Tuesday, 6th March 2007 @ 09:17:49 PM AEST
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"i disappeared in you, you disappeared from me, i gave you everything you ever wanted, it wasn't what you wanted"-U2 "so cruel" hope things get better for you. i love the poem, beautifully written.
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Re: My Final Goodbye.
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by unknown_utopia on
Tuesday, 6th March 2007 @ 09:31:11 PM AEST
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I like the way this flows
well done. |
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Re: My Final Goodbye.
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Wednesday, 7th March 2007 @ 07:12:58 AM AEST
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This was deep. I felt your emotions and your hurt flow through this. Stay strong. This was beautifully written and the flow was great. This was a very sad but great poem.
Take care
*hugs*
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Re: My Final Goodbye.
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by needledancing on
Wednesday, 7th March 2007 @ 08:00:19 AM AEST
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| Put beautifully...thank you |
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Re: My Final Goodbye.
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 7th March 2007 @ 12:21:12 PM AEST
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a beautiful marvelous write.. so eloquently worded.. this is a beautiful way to say goodbye.. sometimes moving on is the best thing to do .. ENchanting
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