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But a dream
Contributed by
rhei76
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Tuesday, 6th March 2007 @ 08:45:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Life is but a dream
A dream to dream away
********
Time is of the essence
Make your choice
& learn today
********
Yeah, reality
Ain't waiting for ya
********
Take what will find you
Let it break and shelter ya
********
Life is but
A block of consciousness
& words ring clear
Devoted and undetained
But I do not care
*******
Life
They are
Watching you
Life
They are all breathing
Your air
********
A massing with great
Warfare
To engage defense
In which we believe
Copyright ©
rhei76
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2007-03-06 20:45:10]
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Re: But a dream
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by FRANCO on
Tuesday, 6th March 2007 @ 09:47:38 PM AEST
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A unique style of writing and i liked it though.
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Re: But a dream
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by needledancing on
Tuesday, 6th March 2007 @ 11:00:52 PM AEST
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thanks rhei...this reminds me of acceptance to the facts of Life, simple, accepting, awareness,
and the march onward.... |
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Re: But a dream
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Wednesday, 7th March 2007 @ 07:09:52 AM AEST
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This was good. The style that it was written in was unique and you did a great job expressing yourself. Great poem.
Take care
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