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Shhh…
Contributed by
FRANCO
on
Tuesday, 6th March 2007 @ 09:21:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
secrets
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Whisper not a word my love,
just whisper not
what you wanna say
same do I wanna say.
Whisper not a word my love
just whisper not.
This very moment frozen,
nd in this still moment of time
there is none, but only me and
only you so;
Whisper not a word my love
just whisper not.
As the setting suns mesmerizing
color drenched thy Seductive face,
when the cloud covered afar blue mountain
like a sliding dark veil from a lasss
bosom; as we stood gazing at each other,
hearts flood with desire,
shivering bodies to Perspire, but
I know and you know
what we wanna to say.
Whisper not a word my love,
just whisper not
what you wanna say
same do I wanna say.
Whisper not a word my love
just whisper notShhh
-FRANCO-
Copyright ©
FRANCO
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Re: Shhh…
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by unknown_utopia on
Tuesday, 6th March 2007 @ 09:24:15 PM AEST
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Excellent
I'm feeling this flow |
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Re: Shhh…
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by elle on
Tuesday, 6th March 2007 @ 09:32:17 PM AEST
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| I like... |
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Re: Shhh…
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by elle on
Tuesday, 6th March 2007 @ 09:33:13 PM AEST
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Re: Shhh…
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by needledancing on
Tuesday, 6th March 2007 @ 10:57:09 PM AEST
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| Can I have a big hug to go with that...? Beautiful my friend. I needed those words if only in a poem from one I admire...it did the trick. thanks |
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Re: Shhh…
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by Janet on
Wednesday, 7th March 2007 @ 09:09:36 AM AEST
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There are times when no words are needed---- very well written.
Janet |
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Re: Shhh…
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 8th March 2007 @ 06:58:05 PM AEST
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Soft and delicate Franco.
There is a loveliness and allure that emanates within
and around this. So completely and entirely beautiful, Franco.
like the breath of an angel ...
excellent post!
~Breezy |
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Re: Shhh…
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 12th March 2007 @ 01:39:24 PM AEST
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Hey, FRANCO! Beautifully said with tenderness 'n' class. Us cowboys might just say, "Shut up 'n' kiss me." 'Course, we git slapped a lot! Wonderful words here, pard.
wabl
KenMoore
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Re: Shhh…
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by yangdantien on
Tuesday, 13th March 2007 @ 09:32:56 PM AEST
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This piece speaks louder than words, it is a fingertip to the lips bidding more to listen then silencing.
Bravo & Well Done
Peace
Yang |
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Re: Shhh…
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by MisfitMe on
Wednesday, 14th March 2007 @ 08:37:49 PM AEST
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Hypnotic...
I feel as if led to... what I dare not give voice to...
Simply Hypnotic...
Shhh... |
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Re: Shhh…
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 29th April 2007 @ 01:46:29 PM AEST
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awww.... so verrryyy sweet!
love n' hugs nessa |
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