|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
The Sinner
Contributed by
Immortal-Dragon21
on
Wednesday, 7th March 2007 @ 10:53:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
|
Recently i was told by doctors I have problems with my heart which is unfixable
& have been told not to expect to live to see my 22nd birthday. This following poem
Is an acount of my life what it was is & has become I am a Sinner. This will haunt me
For the remainder of my days, I will post as much more poetry on here as i can though.
Before I leave, I would like to express my unending gratitude to all those who read my
Poetry & commented telling me what you thought of it.
Thank you all from the deepest part of my soul.
(Immortal Dragon)
The Sinner
Long has the journey become
It would seem that I had left this place yesterday
Yet it has been an age ago since I was last here
Finally I can rest my shattered spirit
In the bosom of my beginnings
So far have I travelled
Across the clouds of time
And the flames of eternity
Take me now before I forget
& drag you deep into my insanity & undoing
Blessed is the man who suffers temptation
The words ring shrill and unbearable in my mind
From the mouths of violent apparitions of my father
Take me nowI beg of you
Let me suffer no more this torment that has befallen me
Remove my eyes so I am blind
Remove my limbs so I am Lame
Drown me in a blood filled tide & burry me in the clouds
Stand me in an empty room desolate, bleak and decrepit
This is heaven, a sinners heaven, MY heaven
There is no god in my heaven
Copyright ©
Immortal-Dragon21
... [
2007-03-07 10:53:24]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: The Sinner
(User Rating: 1 )
by Ari on
Wednesday, 7th March 2007 @ 12:09:41 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
wow thats some heavy stuff dude, I am sorry for your troubles (although you may not want pity)
the poem is very very well written, i like how it progresses nicely from the begining right up to where you make your point in the end...it flows with incredible clarity |
|
|
Re: The Sinner
(User Rating: 1 )
by Malcolmsdreamgirl on
Wednesday, 7th March 2007 @ 01:21:30 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
This poem? it makes me speechless...
Dee xx |
|
|
Re: The Sinner
(User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 7th March 2007 @ 01:24:49 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
this is a very powerful write.. its very expressive and like self cleansing.. great job
vampyress Jenni |
|
|
Re: The Sinner
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Thursday, 8th March 2007 @ 12:10:00 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Very sad but very powerfull write.
God is God to all and the God I know will never leave you.
I believe in miracles as I'm a walking, talking miracle.
When the folks on this site start praying, prayer changes things.
One can see you are very humble is this write.
Love is all things as (God is love).
big huggs, prayer, joy, peace, luv,
emy |
|
|
Re: The Sinner
(User Rating: 1 )
by girlg0newrong on
Thursday, 8th March 2007 @ 02:38:25 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Really awesome dude and I wish you well with whatever happens. Poem's great.
Luv & blessings
-K |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Site Help
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
