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Sunset.Nowhere close to you.
Contributed by
vallie_val
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Wednesday, 7th March 2007 @ 03:36:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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You fell into my world just like the angel from the sky.
I'd give my everything to feel your breath instead of wind.
Sometimes you feel as far from here as stars pinned up so high
But there's a door that leads to me and one day you'll break in.
I laid unconscious on the ground, you were my kiss of life
And just to have you stayed with me I'd die a ten times more.
If I'm supposed to prove it,I have teardrops from my eyes
And trembling lips that whisper,"I have never been more sure".
Horizon's honey-coloured glow,a spark of golden light
The smeared and smoky clouds of pink embrace the magic night
The paint is dripping from the brush onto this spring's palette
It touched my heart and coloured it in shades of fiery red.
Like the first flower that has broken coat of melting snow,
First feelings are so fragile but in time you'll see them grow.
Someday we'll find the gardens in the charm of their full bloom.
I'd walk on chips of broken glass if walking is with you.
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Re: Sunset.Nowhere close to you.
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by Nothingness on
Thursday, 8th March 2007 @ 08:09:35 AM AEST
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wow! honey you need to be more sure of yourself "Just a simple love poem coming from a teenage girl..(just so you don't expect much)" ummm can i say LIE that was wonderful! you made such a beautiful painting with your words!
Horizon's honey-coloured glow,a spark of golden light
The smeared and smoky clouds of pink embrace the magic night
my favorite life, so expressive absoutly wonderful! |
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Re: Sunset.Nowhere close to you.
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by Bleedthelove on
Thursday, 8th March 2007 @ 11:56:52 AM AEST
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| Poetry isnt about a persons age, and I think you proved that with this poem. This was written beautifully. Excellent job. |
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Re: Sunset.Nowhere close to you.
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by priss on
Monday, 12th March 2007 @ 09:17:08 PM AEST
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oh sweetie, i must agree with the others, what a beautiful poem you have written. i absolutely love it, beginning to end!
~priss |
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Re: Sunset.Nowhere close to you.
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 30th April 2007 @ 05:41:17 AM AEST
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beautiful..
love n' hugs nessa |
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