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Lost loves
Contributed by
malcolmsdreamgirl
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Thursday, 8th March 2007 @ 09:42:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
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You talk of pain and broken heart
When with your "true" love you did part ...
But do you KNOW what real pain is?
Yours maybe nothing compared to this ....
To Lose your love, just snatched away
Never to experience the break of day
Never touch their face or hold their hand
This is real pain you understand?....
Your romance broken, they walked away
Ripped your heart in two you say
But you live to love another day...
You have CHOICE to leave that Hell or stay ....
Those, that had no choice atall
Eaten with pain, lonely climb the wall
Wish and pray for their loved ones back
They have no chance, no chance of that ....
So, realise when you lose your love
Unless they leave for Heaven above
How lucky maybe you have been
That they are still there to be seen
Move on and make the most of now
For those with no choice know not how
They will never replace the love they once had
For ever miss them lonely and sad .........
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malcolmsdreamgirl
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2007-03-08 09:42:14]
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Re: Lost loves
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by Grownbabygirl on
Thursday, 8th March 2007 @ 10:26:58 AM AEST
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| Very nice, this is something that I needed to hear. I always enjoy your poems..Thank you for sharing and keep them coming. |
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Re: Lost loves
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by Bleedthelove on
Thursday, 8th March 2007 @ 10:34:10 AM AEST
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| Very well expressed. Beautiful job. |
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Re: Lost loves
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 8th March 2007 @ 10:35:19 AM AEST
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this is a very heartfelt sad yet inspirational write.. so true these words are.. very nicely done
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Re: Lost loves
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by AirHead on
Thursday, 8th March 2007 @ 04:22:59 PM AEST
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lovel read, thank you for sharing
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Re: Lost loves
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by needledancing on
Thursday, 8th March 2007 @ 08:26:11 PM AEST
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| A lovely piece well done. thank you |
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Re: Lost loves
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by Janet on
Friday, 9th March 2007 @ 06:34:22 AM AEST
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Very important lesson to be learned here. Very well written.
Janet |
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Re: Lost loves
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by myheartsvoice on
Sunday, 11th March 2007 @ 12:43:40 AM AEST
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A wise and very experienced lesson here to
pass on. I felt as i read it deep in side of me. an uncanny and unsettling but so true peice
of poetry. Beautifully done.
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