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Waiting!
Contributed by
lowman613
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Tuesday, 25th February 2003 @ 12:20:00 AM in AEST
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Waiting for the moment ,waiting for the day,
to tell you of my love,and want you to stay,
Waiting for the hour I can hold you dear,
waiting for you to wipe away the tear,
Waiting patiently is a vertue,
Waiting just to hold you,
I cant take this waiting game no more,
I'ts killing me honey,to the core,
Time doesnt stand still for no man,
That I truly understand,
If only time could stand still,
So I wouldnt wait,but I still will,
Waiting for the day I can see you longer than a week end,
waiting to be with my husband & my best friend!
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Re: Waiting!
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 25th February 2003 @ 12:38:15 AM AEST
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| Oh! virtuous woman! may God fulfill thy best wishes, but never drop a tear drop on earth. it cannot bear the fire of your anguish. venkat |
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Re: Waiting!
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by Lone_er on
Tuesday, 25th February 2003 @ 10:51:59 AM AEST
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| Such a moving and beautiful poem maam. I pray that day comes soon for you. --Russ |
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Re: Waiting!
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by LadyDama on
Tuesday, 25th February 2003 @ 01:15:34 PM AEST
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| oh... i love this... Christina, you mirror my thoughts of my husband too!!! what are we going to do? ::smile:: wait patiently, because we love them... EXCELLENT poem... |
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Re: Waiting!
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by spooky on
Wednesday, 26th February 2003 @ 08:36:12 PM AEST
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| christina,,we have all the time in the world,,its something that cant be taken away,,we need our partners,,to be with us,,a friend in words,,spooky |
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