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CanDy COateD PoISon
Contributed by
damned_saint
on
Friday, 9th March 2007 @ 01:34:11 AM in AEST
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what's that you've been hiding?
all this time behind a mask
the fake smiles...empty kisses
confusing me, killing me...
was that the effects of your antibiotics?
so sweet but bitter inside
rotten to the core like candy coated poison
and it's killing me, it's kiling me
saying goodbye has'nt been this easy
stop pretending, nothing more to hide
it must be exausting to lose your own game
saying goodbye has'nt been this easy
i don't wanna fall a victim
i dont want a doze of your candy coated poison
and you said it was long over
to think that it was you
running out of your antibiotics
and it's killing you.its killing you...
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2007-03-09 01:34:11]
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Re: CanDy COateD PoISon
(User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on
Friday, 9th March 2007 @ 07:26:36 AM AEST
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This was good. I thought you did a good job expressing what you needed to. This was really good. I like the last stanza..
Take care
Christina-xo |
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