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Sweet Breath Of Fresh Air:
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richard_campbell
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Friday, 9th March 2007 @ 09:34:50 PM in AEST
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Like many days of sweet sun set.
I treasure the way you and i met.
walking along the beach while wet.
i stop so you could catch your breath.
breathing hard and long with lots of glisting sweat
we still embrace like we just met.
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richard_campbell
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2007-03-09 21:34:50]
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Re: Sweet Breath Of Fresh Air:
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by emystar on
Friday, 9th March 2007 @ 11:04:46 PM AEST
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This is simply sweet.
Reminds me of a few places I've been. Like Daytona beach in Florida and the Buffoloe River near the Ozarks.
Well done.
big smiles,
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Re: Sweet Breath Of Fresh Air:
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by Ramfire on
Wednesday, 14th March 2007 @ 11:32:12 AM AEST
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Yes, a great snapshot of you and your girl.
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Re: Sweet Breath Of Fresh Air:
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by FRANCO on
Wednesday, 14th March 2007 @ 11:43:53 AM AEST
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It is a sweet romantic flash back. enjoyed every bit of it.
Great, short and sweet write.
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