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Just One Wish.
Contributed by
bleedthelove
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Sunday, 11th March 2007 @ 01:42:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Carve me a smile
Make it deep and wide
Tear open my chest
Crawl right inside
Steal my last breath
Take me to the edge of death
Slit my wrists
Cut me down to size
Spit in my face
Scratch out my eyes
Cut my throat as I'm pleading
Laugh at me as I lay bleeding
Do your best to make me hurt
Disrespect me, treat me like dirt
Hate me, break me
Ignore me and forsake me
Push me aside, leave me behind
Do your best to be cruel
And treat me unkind
Turn my world black
Make me blind
Trash my faith
Crush my hope
Pull the trigger
Hang my neck from a rope
Just please dont break my heart.
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bleedthelove
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2007-03-11 13:42:21]
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Re: Just One Wish.
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by Loriann on
Sunday, 11th March 2007 @ 02:57:55 PM AEST
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That was a very powerful write of emotion. Great job
Loriann |
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Re: Just One Wish.
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by priss on
Sunday, 11th March 2007 @ 06:11:12 PM AEST
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truly powerful, indeed. so much emotion in this poem, i could amost feel your heart breaking. i really like this poem, although i'm sorry for your pain.
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Re: Just One Wish.
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by Mesano on
Sunday, 11th March 2007 @ 08:38:23 PM AEST
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| very sorry for your pain, but this is a wonderful write... intense emotions... nicely done |
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Re: Just One Wish.
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by unknown_utopia on
Sunday, 11th March 2007 @ 08:44:47 PM AEST
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| Great expression of emotional torture |
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Re: Just One Wish.
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by needledancing on
Monday, 12th March 2007 @ 08:37:29 PM AEST
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| Well done...and now the mending of the heart. Be strong...with all that feeling you have much love to give yet. |
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