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Mistress of Love
Contributed by
Lone_er
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Sunday, 11th March 2007 @ 06:16:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Mistress of Love
You are the subtle whispering
Soft calling of delight
The caring heart of love
Who comforts every night
You are the essence of desire
Touch that never leaves the same
The igniting passion of love
That sets hearts aflame
You are the incarnation
Of all Ive envisioned love to be
All its majesty its wonder
Its omnipotent majesty
But never could I have envisioned
So divine a revelation as you
With body so deliciously sculpted
Those enslaving eyes of blue
Yes I said enslaving
Oh darling you know its true
For the moment I looked into your eyes
My heart was lost to you
Oft times I call you angel
Oft times precious dove
But tonight I call you Mistress
Mistress of love!
Russ
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Lone_er
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2007-03-11 18:16:56]
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Re: Mistress of Love
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by unknown_utopia on
Sunday, 11th March 2007 @ 08:30:57 PM AEST
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Good flow
well done |
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Re: Mistress of Love
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by Mesano on
Sunday, 11th March 2007 @ 08:36:58 PM AEST
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very nicely done - i really liked it
i also liked how you rhymed same with aflame... it's interesting to me because you used desire in the same stanza, and i think i've rhymed desire with on fire...
but yours flowed very well all the way through, keep it up :) |
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Re: Mistress of Love
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by priss on
Sunday, 11th March 2007 @ 10:40:23 PM AEST
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| nicely done...i like! |
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Re: Mistress of Love
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by deadheadpoet on
Tuesday, 10th July 2007 @ 11:42:48 AM AEST
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Beautiful...sounds like a very lucky lady out there.
Peace,
Laura |
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